Gonna be a short commentary today. I gotta make a quick run to the bank. :D

This and the next two-three pages weren't in the origional script. During the re-write I realized I needed to give Mir more screen time to develop her character...and just to give Mir more screen time. I like her character. She is the first example I ever had of an idea just walking fully-formed out of the pen. I spent several days working on getting Sarah and Lucy's characters right (mostly trying to get "sexy" to come out of the pencil for Lu). Mir exploded into the story during a thirty-minute sketching session, and every single detail from her hair to her race magically appeared with little to no help from me.

Well, I gotta run now. Looks like rain outside and I still have no functional car. At least the bank's not THAT far away.

Talk more laters. And go visit the forum please.

CW - Chelsea Gaither